The rainbow – Poem (remake)

I fell in loveanimation4wl2
With someone in the sky above

An emblazoned mime
A traveler of time

With colors rife
The brilliance of life

Her spectrum in the air
A Secret to hidden affairs

A stream of light
Bending out of sight

Each color a different flavor
All of them I wish to savor

Like a silent train
Among clouds and rain

To where she flows
No one knows

The beautiful daughter
Of light and water

Her journey spun
From rain and sun

 

Many people liked my original small poem The rainbow – A poem , so I put some more inspiration into it. Tell me how you found this poem (is it better than the previous ?)

2 thoughts on “The rainbow – Poem (remake)

  1. Hello, I would like to invite you to join; The Poetic Voice Community. It is a writer’s site where you can enter contests – add poetry and get feedback. The latest entries are listed on the blog posts. Click on link, and check us out! Then join, and post.

    Website: http://poeticvoice.ning.com/

Please share your thoughts