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  1. Splendid, splendid, but some quick advice:

    Rather than ‘Among colors rife’, I’d use ‘With [Adjective] color rife”. It has correct grammar and could add a nice lingual touch to the poem. For example, “With resounding color rife” or “With resolute color rife”. However, these lines are a tad long for your poem… perchance ‘With lucid color rife’? No, no, no…

    I hope I could be of some aid. To point out something very good, I enjoyed the last stanza very much.

  2. Wow! I really liked this poem. Your words were brilliant, making the poem much more interesting to read.

  3. I really like your “Rainbow Poem” Its very beautiful!!!

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